I love it this is so good

Thanks You!!!!! QvQ

Good job

Thanks you!!!!! >w<)/

Great job!

(*w*)/ Hello! Greetings to all! >w<)/
I am Yami !, a new artist, I wanted to invite you to see my drawings!!
And if you want to give me constructive criticism I would be very happy!!
I started drawing Hentai to lose my shyness, yes .. I am very shy even if it doesn't seem like it! (u//u)
I look forward to getting along with you! -u-)/

Sorry for rewriting here! My internet does not seem to want to let me load the blog Q///Q

First of all welcome it's nice to meet you can't wait to see your artwork and don't worry about the shyness we are all friends here

Welcome to the site bud. Your colouring and shading are great but you need to work on your body proportions and positioning. Your bodies aren't as anatomically correct as they could be. Just my opinion ?

Thanks to both of you!! It is a pleasure to meet you!!
I will take note of your criticisms!!, I have some anatomy books, I will study and practice much more!!
If it doesn't bother you, could you tell me some parts of the character that look bad?
That is, what is worse drawn, I will start practicing with that first!!!

@Yamich nothing is wrong with your coloring or even the shading the main problem is the angle how the structure of the angle of the character should be drawn my best suggestion would be try to see more artist and how they draw a character for a sex position

As I said I love your artwork just keep it up and you are gonna be great

The main issue I noticed was the erza bj pic. Her eyes are way too far apart. Your other pictures just feel quite stiff. They need to feel more free flowing if that makes sense? Just things to work on. ?

Thank you!
I will look for model photos and use artist references from here! I will work with that !!
Thank you!! His advice gave me many ideas !!! (*w*)/